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Lorenzo is 14 years old and he is living in Rome. His personality is very strange. He loves to be alone and he doesn't have friends. He has mental problems but he can pretend like as normal person. “If the others didn’t leave me alone, if they pushed me too far, the blood would rise up through my legs, flood my stomach and spread out to the tips of my hands, and then I would clench my fists and lash out.” This shows how much does he hate to be with people. He loves to be alone and he doesn't need anyone. Anyway, his personality changed after he met Olivia. Olivia is the most influence person in Lorenzo's life. His personality changed because he learned how important is to have good relationships with other people. Lorenzo hated her at first but he stated to realize that relationship with other people is wonderful and joyful. Olivia told him to dance at last night that they stay together. “when I danced I felt something I’d never felt before. I felt alive –it took my breath away. In a few hours I would leave that cellar. And everything might go back to the way it was. And yet I knew that beyond that door the world was waiting for me, and that I would be able to talk to the others like I was one of them.” This is very small thing but it changed his personality little. It shows how fun is to hangout with other people and he learned about it. I think Lorenzo realized that staying with people is better than being alone. People can change other person’s personality and it happened to Lorenzo. At end of the story, we could see how he changed from when he was 14 years old.